Wednesday, August 30, 2017
Tuesday, August 29, 2017
Amiras Story Rewrite
Amiras story rewrite
Bombs dropping everywhere, blood, cuts tumbling down the people in Syria. Kaboom! Missiles from fighter jets were being launched from the air. “AHH!” Silence was not possible in this terrible war. Roofs were blown off people’s houses. “We should get outta here” my friend Willow said. “Ture” I tried to say but my words got lost in the wind.
“This way!”,”I think there's an underground escape route for attacks and stuff” she yelled as loud as she could.”Ok” the words finally came out. They found an escape route and went through it quickly. Once they were far away they stopped running,”I can’t believe we're in a sewer!” mouned Willow. Muddy water splashed up their legs as they walked slowly in need of food and water “I think we might need to drink this yucky water” I said quietly. “It’s a big risk Amira we could get sick and die from it” Willow warned me but it was too late I had already taken a sip of the water and suddenly felt sick.”Why did I do that?” I asked sadly there was a hint of light not to far away “,I think the end of the tunnel is close” I said “yes very close” yelled Willow.
Everything was quiet no sounds of constant bombs blasting all over the place and even the birds were not chirping their happy song,just the silent humming of me and Willow in our small ditch in the ground just lying there looking at the sky. Once they had gotten out of the tunnel bombs went everywhere and they ran as fast as they could when soon enough fell into a flat screen T.V sized hole,and there they lay panting and gasping for air then everything went black and disappeared.
-Yawn- I woke up in something that looked like a hospital Willow was sitting beside me along with some of my friends and family like my mother, my friends:Alia,Willow,Ally,Miami,and Paris they were just standing there staring at me with worried faces. “Mother!” I yelled loudly “I missed you so much” “me too” replied mum. “The war is over” Paris bravely said “Thank god!” I cheered. Everyone was so happy it was a beautiful day the sun was shining,birds were chirping, and it seemed almost as if there were a happy christmas cheer.”Where are we?” I asked “oh where are we? We are in new zealand” Mum said “What! How did we get here?” I kept asking questions finally they answered.”Well...Willow came back and called for help then while helping us escape and then we saw a plane we waved our hand in the call for help it then landed and transported us to new zealand we are going to the refugee camp tomorrow” Ally said kindly.
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