Poor people

Poor People

Help the poor end the rich don't be shy. We should take half of the rich people’s money and give it to the poor. Take the elders to old people homes, help the kids,teens and adults.

Did you know that a man made a pair of shoes out of a water bottle and string.

Some people are sleeping in cars! We should build more houses and give them to the poor. Offer jobs to the poor so that they can get more money and live a happy life.

Children are skinny and their bones are sticking out because of hunger. They have no clothes and are dying quickly.

I hope that this piece of writing encourages you to help the poor and maybe become a hero. People are dying from hunger,coldness and passing out from exhaustion. So please help the poor today and we shall suffer no more.

Swarleen and Maia

Swarleen and Maia story rewrite.

I opened my eyes to darkness. The monotone voice calmly repeated like really  annoying robot. Lazily I  turned  my  limb half awake body and stretched out my arm to turn off my frustrating alarm clock. I finally get some time off come on why do I have to wake up so early I wondered  curiously to myself. silence  deafened my ears  as i lay there.

Why is it so dead I thought mysteriously. No sounds of car engines roaring down the road. No kakapos singing sweet songs in the bushy trees nature's own alarm clock. No constant echoes of people getting ready for work. What was happening? I silently ruffled the blankets off my body like bird feathers. Cool crisp Dunedin air approached  my body as I slipped on my dressing grown. I silently drifted through the hallway like i’m going through a portal.

Reaching the end of the creaky hall way  i placed my newly papered nails onto the silky antique door knob and rotated it to the right the glare was  too much for my eyes what was going on ? A misty breeze swallowed  me and teleported me into a  white wonderland .

By Swarleen Kaur & Maia van den Berk